Seriously, PU bloggers (and beyond), learn how to use the enter/return key. Reading a huge block of text that is over seven sentences long is absolutely annoying (sometimes even that is straining). How am I supposed to want to read and comment on your entry if looking at your one paragraph of 42 sentences is too overwhelming?
Another thing that you should look up is capitalization. It is not "i," it is "I." Words after periods (that's the . symbol) should be capitalized unless it is an abbreviation (that is not at the end of a sentence)... Just because you are offended, does not mean you should bring up e e cummings. You are not him and I highly doubt you write well enough to even be considered someone similar.
Know the rules of grammar before you fucking break them.
Commas are neat. Use them.
Would it not be disappointing if the person that won the scholarship could not even write? Yeah, sure it is the internet... but grammar is sexy. It should be used all over.
Not to mention, netspeak on a website for academics makes one look like they have the intelligence of a shoe.
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