My proposal for my paper yall...tell me what you think about how this paper is starting to shape up.
Topic: Premarital Sex
Purpose: To inform and Persuade
Thesis:
America's casual regard of premarital sex, and consequential lack of monogamy, is largely the result of media treatment, peer pressure, family bias, and mixed messages from various sexual education organizations across the country.
Key Words: media, peer pressure, family bias, sex ed organizations
Overvies: premarital sex, monogamy
Strategies: Definition, Cause & Effect, Statistics, Peer Interviews
Intro:
Statistics; students in college age group having premarital sex.
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Statistics fail marraiges premarital sex vs failed abstince
Overview: premarital sex
Definition
Media Treatment
1. Sex on Television
2. Sex in movies
3. Sex Sells(the comercialism of sexuality)
Peer Pressure
1. Definition
2. Everybody's doing it
3.Statistics: Who is REALLY doing it
Family bias:
1. What are mom and dad doing
2. Stats on how early parents feel comfotatble talking to kids about sex
3. Stats on weather kids are more likely to have sex with or without talks from parents
Sex Ed
1. Definition
2. Different types of sex ed
3. Organizations that provide opionions on sex for adolecents
4. Stats on the effectiveness of each of these organizations to get their point across
Overview: Monogamy
Information on how monogamy affects the society as a whole
Stats on divorces caused by extermarital relations
Stats on couples who abstained from premarital sex and the likelyhood for monogamy versus couples who had sex before marraige.
Conclusion:
Restate that Monagamy and Premarital sex are closley related, and give one last opinion on the subject
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I like it. I hope it goes good for you. What is monogramy? What intro did you decide to go with?
America's casual regard of premarital sex, and consequential lack of monogamy, is largely the result of media treatment, peer pressure, family bias, and mixed messages from various sexual education organizations across the country.
The reason I didn't post a paper is because my teacher killed the assignment, she based our final grade on the Proposal you see above...