well today was a regular day i woke up went to work and there is were i realized this world is a crazy place. I was bagging some groceries for these 4 young african american women and they were talking about barack obama. they said that he should be president just because he is also african american. yeah i know that it makes all the african americans out there happy that someone of color is running for office but come on, voting for someone just because of color or even sex in hilary's case. you've really got to look at what they stand for. i didnt say anything to them because everybody is entitled to thier own opinion but please help me out here. i know that i am young and everyone thinks every young pwerson doesnt know anything about politics but people underestimate us young people.i mean i would never vote for hiliary clinton because first shes a woman and second she agrees with abortion. i mean do get me wrong i am a woman but i wouldnt want our nation ran by a womwan i dont think she is incapable of doing i just think she would destroy everything all the men before her have worked so hard to build. and about obama i would vote for him either i dont have any specifics but he is just like hilary. my vote is going to mcain.
what has this world come to????
By sofia_aiden - Posted on March 8th, 2008
People will always be biased,some poll said that 30 percent of the people taking the poll would vote race driven.
+mspin
WE NEED A DEMOCRAT!!!!!
it makes me mad whenever someone says im going to vote for hilary because she is a women or i am going to vote for obama because he is black. whenever someone says that i ask them if they have a legit reason for voting for them and they look at me like duh thats a legit reason....um reality check weather you are female, male, white, or black you are stll a human being you just look different. you still have to know what you are doing to be the president and please know your facts about the person you are voting for not just their race or gender because thats no reason at all to vote for someone.
~ <3 Breanne <3 ~
Dude, and I feel like I'm saying this to much, you need to capitalize and seperate your paragraphs. It was a blog fit for this website completely. The thought was great and you inspired others to talk on your blog, but it was terrible to read. Believe me, your work gets alot more reviews and comments if you just tone your blogs and seperate your ideas in to a nice and neat pleasurable read.
The way I do it is I try to write it right the first time. Then I go through, re-read to make sure everything fits together, and revise it.
Just that first revision goes along way.