My dear Cliche,

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Oh do I believe in dandylions?!
Surely Mother Noose knows me better
than that! And wrapped in gauze, I'll
find all my wretched worries. I would
shed a tear for yesterday, but it's best to
let some days go unmourned. If "God" had
a child, it'd be named cliche.

There are many things to be discretely shared in lives lead so depressingly trapping and cold. To the liking of your discrepency, we've edited out several desecrating moments. At times we are minimalized and made to feel incredibly insignificant and dear. You can excuse disappointments and disguse them as perpetual flaws, but...I know better, I know most people aim to displease and disappoint. Contrary to belief, most men cannot love anyone or thing more than they love their own genitals. The same can be said about some number of women...In the same manner that some disarm their wits, some discern their beauty. I'd like never to forget that in the midst of all the shit, there will be some worth while laughs and partial smiles.

Why in movies is it that deep meaningful connections and mutual attractions are only shared between men & women?

Umm, I didn't really understand that...It was kind of all over the place.
Where ya going with this blog?

-Amanda-

I don't see what there is to get.
Just my opinions about life...

If you don't have the mind to interpret it, that's no problem of mind.
I think your comment was pointless.

Somethings are better left alone.
I hate when people try to nit pick and find underlying messages...
Sometimes there's nothing to get.

Like I wish people would leave poetry alone...
It's not all meant to mean something.

It doesn't mean anything.
Okay...Okay...

It actually does...
But I don't feel the need to explain.
IT''s all there, verbatim.

"Are you out of your Vulcan mind!?"

burningexample's picture
Volunteer for the Progressive U Alumni Association

Okay...

But you posted this to a Progressive Blogging site, not to Myspace, livejournal, or a creative writing site.

No one is out of line for asking you to explain.

Many might argue that your vague and... um... poetic... opinions on life are not sufficient to be considered a "Progressive" blog on this site.

You should check out http://writing.progressiveu.org/ for posts like this and leave the main site for more "progressive" works that you can give answers for. There are opportunities for points there, as well.

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You are the Voice of the Childwen of the Revowution! [Toulouse, Moulin Rouge]

Everyone's gonna have their critics. I just wanted to understand what it was about.

-Amanda-

green underbelly's picture

Not oh so creative if you didn't shat, giggle and yawn to that jumble...

The form reminded me of an all too progressive Velvet Underground song. 'Murder Mystery' or something.

Every organism's heartbeat holds a universe of beauty at http://www.progressiveu.org/blog/green-underbelly

And then I...I might just fucking leave this site.
Ugh...

It's a bore anyways!

Piss Off!!!

burningexample's picture
Volunteer for the Progressive U Alumni Association

Was it that serious?

I didn't think so...

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You are the Voice of the Childwen of the Revowution! [Toulouse, Moulin Rouge]

sawaboof's picture
Volunteer for the Progressive U Alumni Association

oh for the love of dogs.

cry me a river, build a bridge, and get over it.


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