So lately, my friend and I have been looking online about Animal Cruelty. We found an online site called www.Kentuckyfriedcruelty.com and what they do.. honestly how can you do that to a little animal? I can't even eat at this place anymore. I mean, I know there are you can't kill something completely pain free, but what they do is just.. all over wrong. In Peru, when you graduate from the military, you will slauter your own dog. I mean.. i know its there tradition and custom.. but is it right? I'm don't live on Veggies, but the more I read about Animal Cruelty, the more i wonder if i should be living on them. Mars candy bars fund Animal Testing. Look at the things PETA has uncovered. People that start abusing animals don't stop there, sometimes they can get much farther then that, they can abuse there kids. Close to where i live, there is a guy who slautered his new puppy, because his kids fed it breakfest, he almost killed his baby. Because it fed the dog breakfest?! Ugh, how can anyone do that? TO ANYONE!? What do you guys think? I know that some people look both ways on animal testing, and animal cruelty.. but i don't think i can look at what people do anymore. =[
-Amanda*
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I expected some more facts about animal cruelty in this blog given the title. I'm an animal rights guy, so I agree with you, but I'd just like to see a blog with some original points rather than opinions.
Yeah, I'll add more on. I'm kinda sick right now, and im just starting out on this site. But.. I have started a site on another online community. Thanks for the comments=]
Amanda*
I agree with your first commenter.
This sentence: "We found an online site called www.Kentuckyfriedcruelty.com and what they do.. honestly how can you do that to a little animal? " would have been more effective if you'd breifly explained what happens to animals. Many bloggers will be in too much of a rush or too lazy to go to the site themselves if they aren't convinced this is an interesting topic. Make it interesting and make your readers listen.
Since you're new, I think I should point out that any editing should get done right away. Usually when a post is no longer a "recent blog posts", fewer people come to visit it. You'll want to get everything down the first time so you have the most potential readers/comments.
Good luck with the contest!
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Ok, I've just visited the site and their home page is really striking. If you'd included any of their intro paragraph into your blog, you would have had some good facts.
"KFC suppliers cram birds into huge waste-filled factories, breed and drug them to grow so large that they can’t even walk, and often break their wings and legs. At slaughter, the birds’ throats are slit and they are dropped into tanks of scalding-hot water—often while they are still conscious. It would be illegal for KFC to abuse dogs, cats, pigs, or cows in these ways." (kentuckyfriedcruelty.com)
Then you could check out the other pages, like "Why KFC?" and made a great post.