“When I take a Bath”
When I take a Bath
I wash away the day
The failures, the
accomplishments, all just melt away
When I take a Bath
I wash away the pain
The hearts breaks, the mental
cases, and the emotional stains.
When I take a Bath
I wash away my Sins
As I wash the dirt and the
day's grime off my skin
When I take a Bath
I wash away these feelings of
hate and love
As I hope to clean myself of
the one I dream of.
When I take a Bath
I wash away the pressures of
being me disappear
As I remember why I'm here
When I take a Bath
I wash away the old me
As I bring out the new aspect
of me
When I take a Bath
I wash away my thoughts of
the day
Because as I dry off, I
know all will be okay
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that was actually really cool i liked it alot
I really like this poem because not only is some of it true for me, but because it is positive.
I generally hate poetry, but there are a few exceptions.. this is one of them :)
Good work
Cute poem :]
I was thinking about the same thing in the shower this morning, actually.
I get a lot of good thinking done in there ;)
CUTE
With Love Always,
Stacy Lynn <3
Nice poem, almost catchy, and inspirational in it's own way. At least, that's how I see it.
I totally understand this, and it's so true! You can just relax and let go; you're by yourself to think and be at peace and move on to the next day
I love this poem.
especially the last line.
it repeats well, it generally just well put together. i felt like ive heard it before though...
i like it :)
Makes me want to go home and take a bath! Just wash away all of my pain and disappointments. You are a very good writer! Thank you for sharing your poem!
This is really good! I think if we all would take the time to relax and unwind once in a while, we'd all be better off. Maybe I'll go take a bath right now.
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