This is a poem I wrote for fun.
It is in one of the short storys I made for school.If you want I will post the chapters one by one each week.
There is 12 chapters so it will take 12 weeks.
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She is both my best friend and inner self.
She kills me from the inside.
Ripping at my sides.
The blood splatters before my eyes.
Cleaning out the poison.Cutting out my tongue.
Tears of joy fall.As I finally explode.
My insides consume the room.
The flower that was,seconds before, spotless and full of joy , is now crimson.
Nothing is untuched by this substance of pain and understanding.
The last drop of blood kisses the floor.Along with my entire existence.
Ravenouse blood washes out the formalities.
Cleaning out the poison that was once my life.
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nice use of words ;] great job!
very nice keep them coming