But before I can get the words out
You decide you dont want to hear my reason
You ask for my side of the story
But reject it as it is given
You ask questions and poke holes
While pretending I have your attention
Eventually you decide to come to a conclusion
I speak on reality but you cling to an elusion
Your like whittney houston on crack
You deny that there is a problem
I know my side of the story and the reasons for my action
But you are blind to facts your prefer your opinion
Soon I find myself in the depth of frustration
Im telling you the truth
This is all a misunderstanding
Why won't you listen?
Do you even hear me speaking?
I am trying to remain calm
But I fell Like screaming!!
Ignorantly your disregarding everything I am saying
Im trying to paint you a picture
But you dont want to look at my painting
My facts
My story
My words
My reality
Im telling you what happened
But you're dismissing my points prematurely
I keep opening my mouth
As frustration build inside me
What is wrong with you?
I want to scream
Words aren't exchanged between us
I throw words out and you hit them back at me!!!
Frustraion is tingling in my every bone
You've given judgement on me before
the verdict has been shown
Im yelling and screaming
I know the who what when where and whys
But soon as I open mouth to speak
Your eyes become deaf and your ears become blind
why won't you just listen?
I have so much to say
I know you've already made your decsion
But that decision
Has to CHANGE!!!!
CAN i HAVE YOUR ATTENTION?
By ariesizme - Posted on April 15th, 2008















This is very beautiful and I very much connect to the speaker. Keep up the good work!
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"He had decided to live forever or die in the attempt, and his only mission each time he went up was to come down alive."
Great poem. It really gets your message across well.
Excellent poem - it was very well written and you got your point across well. Good job :).
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