To you, I promise
You are the only one I'll always love.
No matter who you're with
If you are happy
I'll hold back my tongue.
I never want to see you crying any tears of pain
I promise,
If you'll let me
I'll protect you from the rain.
Don't ever underestimate
The passion in my heart
For you, and only you,
My love
I've loved you from the start.
If I can't be the one to soothe you
Every waking hour,
I promise, love
I'll always do
Whatever is in my power.
Though your age may far surpass
My own,
Please know, I've never cared
For anything but you, my love.
Darling, I'll never stray
From the silent passion we share.
Although we may be strangers,
And to the world taboo.
I'll never take notice of anyone else
I promise,
No one else but you.
And though it's hard for me to watch
You walk away with her
I know in my heart
That love we share
Will never break apart.
And though my passion
Burning strong
Will never dissipate,
I love you stronger with each day
And every night up late.
I've longed for you to know,
My love
Of what I'd sacrifice for you.
In the blink of an eye
I'd sprint two thousand miles
To see you.
And to save you, my love,
My only one,
I'd surely fight off death.
I'd battle devils and demons and any apparition
That tried to steal your breath.
For you are truly my hero,
My prince,
Though we may be apart.
To me,
However,
You will always be
The love burning in my heart.
For: G
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You are quite talented in your poetry. Good job :)
Thank you so much!
Honestly, I rarely ever write poetry; I usually write short stories and stuff like that, but I had inspiration today, and this was the result. :]
"Say something that you know they might attack you for." - Linkin Park
I like how it's saying I want you to be happy and even if you aren't with me it's okay as long as you are happy! It sounds like someone who is experienceing true love not I love you I can't live without you obsession. I thought it was a little choppy in some parts, and weirdly worded, I wish it flowed a little better; but I loved it just the same.
Thanks for your comments.
I rarely ever write poetry, but I had inspiration today, and sat down and just typed. I really didn't do much editing to it, and I may go back later and do so, but I decided to just leave it raw for now.
"Say something that you know they might attack you for." - Linkin Park
Okay, so this is pretty much amazing.
Keep up the good work!
:D
Thank you! :]
"Say something that you know they might attack you for." - Linkin Park