Just another soul drowning
I watch...
From a shaky dock I sit
My toes
splish
splashing
in your sorrows
Nothing but a drunken slur
Your silhouette just floats around..
And I watch...
plunging
plummenting
Your dreams gasping for air
your mind struggling to float
I watch you...
swallow problem after problem
bottle after bottle
gulping full years of fears
Currents of depression
pull you further away
And I watch you
sink
sinking
Now nothing but a blur...
I watch...
just watch...
Watch you just
drip
and
drop



good poem
intersting!
interesting....it really makes you think..I like it!
~ Be so strong that nothing can disturb your piece of mind~
very interesting....
nicely written!