It just goes over and over and over again.
Never ending just repeating.
Don't do it.
Not again.
The fear, the hurt, the confusion.
Oh, god.
Just hold me.
Never, never, no, not again.
Do you want me?
Could you need me?
So much inside.
Just let it go.
Left behind.
Over and over and over again.
Don't you know...?
I could be...?
If I could just lie here forever.
Maybe,
Locked inside myself.
What if I was found?
Inside myself.
It lies.
Waiting.
So alone...It hurts.
So, Unfeeling.
I can't hear my heart.
I can taste my tears.
Is this why I can't see...
Just stop.
Stop.
Voted a one for not explaining your poem.
~Maybee Sinclair~
GO ME----Plant A TREE !!!!!
i loved this... so much emotion. i'm glad i don't know the explaination, that is what makes this so original. its like its the thought process gone through while in midst of a crisis. awesome.
your poem confusion is really really nice cuz it has really confused me darling
i agree
I like that its confusing
Its emotion
Emotion is explained
I love it
~ Be so strong that nothing can disturb your piece of mind~
...are you actually meant to write this on this site? I thought this was more along the lines of the creative writing portion of the site.
The point wasn't to explain, it wasn't meant to be explained.
But, it was an inner battle with yourself. Raw. In the head. How you know you're feeling a way, ex: deep depression, people ask you what's wrong. And you can't tell them, can you? The words never leave your mouth, you don't know how to explain.
Cutting yourself, wishing to die, HOPE that this time you will.
Not wanting to b/c your scared. Wanting to be rescued. That animal inside that's ugly and hungry and laughing at you to see you do it to yourself again.