I thought i kill two birds with one stone.
HPV has been recomended for young girls to prevent cervical cancer when they older. Well It has been a controversy. This vaccine is advertised on television. There are problems.
One of the problems is side effects. Some people are starting to question. Some people aregetting sick after the vaccine and becoming injured or even die because of it. The controversy rages.
http://www.cnn.com/2008/HEALTH/conditions/07/07/cervical.cancer.vaccine/...
"Girls and women have blamed the vaccine for causing ailments from nausea to paralysis -- even death. Fifteen deaths were reported to the FDA, and 10 were confirmed, but the CDC says none of the 10 were linked to the vaccine. The CDC says it continues to study the reports of illness.
Gardasil prevents the spread of human papillomavirus, known as HPV -- a sexually transmitted virus that can cause cervical cancer in a relatively small number of girls and women."
Now when it comes to drugs to lower cholesterol
Source : http://www.cnn.com/2008/HEALTH/conditions/07/07/children.cholesterol.dru...
"For the first time, an influential doctors group is recommending that some children as young as 8 be given cholesterol-fighting drugs to ward off future heart problems."
I am worried about side effects. WHat are the effects long term?
So I am going to look at it this way.... look for quotations.
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I don't intend to offend you with this, but I thought a little constructive criticism was in order. First.... separating your posts with spaces between paragraphs would be incredibly helpful in figuring out what is original content and what is not. Secondly, every post should contain at least 200 words minimum of content written by you. Because of the way this post, amongst a few others of yours, are formatted, it's incredibly difficult for the moderators to tell what is cited information and what is not.
You've complained a few times that you wished you had more comments on your posts... I would suggest that you provide more commentary on your posts if you want others to comment as well. You say you are worried about side effects... but why? We want to know your thoughts and what you think should be done... not just what the news is telling us. It's hard to comment on a post in which there isn't much to comment on, such as this post. We want to hear your thoughts so that we can respond to them... we can't do that if most of what we get is news articles.
Your blogs would also get more attention and commentary if you checked and double checked spelling and grammar. There are several mistakes in this post that make it come across as if you were being careless and/or just didn't spend a lot of time reading it. Those mistakes also make it difficult to figure out what you're talking about. Most users want to feel as if you care about the topic you're writing about... and part of that is feeling as if you spent time making sure it was presented in the best light possible by checking for errors and getting rid of as many of those as possible.
Now, you don't have to take my advice, but given that you've commented several times on how you wish others would comment on your posts more... I thought I'd give it a shot and attempt to help you figure it out so that happens. I know you have a lot to say... we just want to hear you say it so that we can respond.
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Like writing? So do we!
~Fallon~
"If I fall asleep with a pen in my hand, don't remove it - I might be writing in my dreams."- Pace
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You should think about what you said. You are wrong. This is not an English Class. I think you should look at Mark Twain, ee cummings and others who things were done in a different sort of way.
Published Author and Poet
Teacher Education Student.
With all due respect, I've been here for over 2 years now. I think I have a pretty good idea of what users here appreciate in addition to what our editorial policy expects of bloggers. I wasn't trying to force you into doing anything, simply giving you a little polite advice that would ultimately help you reach a wider audience and bring more comments to your posts as you have indicated you would like to see. Flagging my comment was uncalled for and a tiny bit vindictive for no good reason.
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Like writing? So do we!
~Fallon~
"If I fall asleep with a pen in my hand, don't remove it - I might be writing in my dreams."- Pace
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I had most of the poems for 15 years or more before publishing them. It was cheaper to bundl them in a book than other ways.
Published Author and Poet
Teacher Education Student.
I'm not really sure why that was important for me to know... I didn't say anything except that I thought being able to buy an ISBN was a neat idea. But thanks for the extra information, I think.
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Like writing? So do we!
~Fallon~
"If I fall asleep with a pen in my hand, don't remove it - I might be writing in my dreams."- Pace
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I'd like a link on where I could purchase your published work. Preferably from amazon.com.
Also, ee cummings wasn't exactly someone who was notable during his time. If I recall, the critics hated him.
Mark Twain typed (and he was the first author to actually type a book) in a manner that best represented the vernacular and diction of the characters. The blacks talk in a "manna tha' allow us white folk to 'ndastan HOW they was talkin'" and not just what they were saying.
Mark Twain was also a fucking genius. I loved Letters From the Earth.
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Fallon's comments are helpful..Do not take it personally.
I actually have a physical spelling disorder so I have to be careful.
I cannot believe i just confessed to a brain disability!
Nothing to be ashamed of there. I have a learning disability as well and have admitted it several times here. Having a disability or disorder doesn't mean you can't still be intelligent
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Like writing? So do we!
~Fallon~
"If I fall asleep with a pen in my hand, don't remove it - I might be writing in my dreams."- Pace
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I am in the Deep south which the same region as where Huck Finn and Tom Sawyer would live. I hear those words all the time.
Amazon.com, Barnes and Noble
look under Lily Sparkletoon.
I reviewed a book awhile back on Terrorism 101 and Sustainable Ethanol which is concerning what we are facing now. I may have to write up a review on that book for here.
I had to unfortunately cover in an English class in college once a story which was written long ago written by someone and the story offended me. It was offensive because of the references to those who are prejudice against whites as well as another story written by someone who knew the people involved in Brown V board of education.
Published Author and Poet
Teacher Education Student.
Self-published through a company called Outskirts Press. It is, in fact, for sale on amazon, though.
http://www.progressiveu.org/blog/ediblewoman
You know you can buy you own ISBN and sell through Amazon via self publishers? Kinda neat since most bookstores won't get self publications the time of day.
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Like writing? So do we!
~Fallon~
"If I fall asleep with a pen in my hand, don't remove it - I might be writing in my dreams."- Pace
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I also sell my own book on my website....ie autographed copies.
Outskirtspress has the ebook edition.
Barnes and noble will carry my books or they can order. I read a lot of OP books. IN fact my book has been to Berlin bookfair and West HOllywood bookfair and has been in a writing magazine.
Published Author and Poet
Teacher Education Student.