Hry everyone, this is a poem I wrote a few years ago. Please read, and offer feedback if you like. I've never had anyone critique it. It was simply too painful to share.
Alone
Here I stand
All alone
Left in the cold
Left in the rain
With no-one to hold
No-one to ease my pain
Here I stand
Alone
There's no-one in sight
I've been forsaken on the streets
Left In the treacherous night
A harsh rain on my skin beats
Here I stand
With no-one
Everyone has left me
Take me, or leave me, because Here I stand
All alone
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