S-3-X

Emily Hansen's picture
 

S-3-X

3 simple letters
One simple word

Containing so much meaning
So Much clawing
So Much Screaming

Poison or Paradise
Take your pick

Suck Screw
Ohhh Ohhh

So many positions
Who new your body
Twisted that way?

Oops you got pregnant
Super dustbusters on its way
WAIT
Doesnt the baby have a say!

Back to the bedroom
Headboard a clatter

Sores start to appear
Doctor Doctor
As quickly as they came
POOF
They disappear

Hickeys on your neck
Some in other places
From different guys
Bruises in all sorts of places

Your only seventeen
Defining the word whore
Come on scream for more

Pleasure is tempory
Internal Bruises will last
Permanently scarring
An invisible cast

Abortions are not the answer
Antibiotics can not fix all
Being a whore has consequences
So close your legs and take the fall~

3.26087
Average: 3.3 (46 votes)
Member of the Progressive U Alumni Association

Great poem.

I like this. Lol.

I like it... kind of funny. Needs some polishing and more content. It's a bit too simple for my tastes.. but it's alright.

sodamnbeautiful's picture

It's pretty good, I definately get where you're going with it.

missionsminded_maiden's picture
Member of the Progressive U Alumni Association

This poem cuts deep...When taken out of context, sex certainly does have consequences.
Bekka Joy

this was awful! and why are just girls whores? what about guys? and why was abortion added? i don't understand.

Don't you get it? The entire poem is about abortion. The author was just pointing out the fact that most abortions originate from women not wanting to take responsibility for their actions. I know it might be surprising, but not very many abortions involve rape or the inability to safely give birth, as most pro-choicers would have you believe.

John Colby- 17, Tampa, FL

This was a great poem because to me, it really taught me a lesson not to try to get pregnant before I'm married.

abkspitzer's picture

Pretty blunt, but definetly gets the point across. How you could see this isn't about abortion I don't know... but very very good.
~AnGeLa~

this was a great poem. it meant and showed a lot. i loved it!!!

this was a great poem. it meant and showed a lot. i loved it!!!

this was a great poem. it meant and showed a lot. i loved it!!!

That poem is GREAT!!

Charmed 428's picture

it is totally right in every single word

Readingkt6's picture

Good poem. Like someone else said, it needs a little bit if polishing and editing but very good otherwise.

K.Roe's picture

Well, I get your point. Very unsympathetic, though... you certainly shove your point down our throats, but ok, I guess.

Member of the Progressive U Alumni Association

I guess it is OK if you like arguments that aren't backed up by....anything at all. It would have been better if it were accompanied with an essay.

I love abortion. Read more here:
http://progressiveu.org/044921-i-love-abortion-even-if-it-murder

nice poem its really clever

I like poems like this. So simple and yet profound. And I agree- very blunt. But it gets the point across.

There is a time to live, and a time to die. But now it the time to break it down!

astarachaos's picture

It is time that someone is not affraid to put it out there. Abortion is something that people take too lightly anymore. Sex even more then abortion, especially when you hear about 12 year olds having babies. Its apalling to see the statistics, yet no one is paying attention to it. I have a little girl and I would not want to find out that she is out having intercourse with one boy after another. Oh and your right too, there are some STD's you cant get rid of. AIDS and HIV is nothing to play with, if you havent noticed there is no cure yet but the epidemic is growing fast. If you cant keep your legs closed then you deserve the consequences of your lack of respect for your body.

Member of the Progressive U Alumni Association

Not everyone that has sex lacks respect for their body. My husband and I have sex quite frequently, and I definitely respect myself. If I were to become pregnant or get an STD, I don't necessarily "deserve" it. It just happened. Period.

I love abortion. Read more here:
http://progressiveu.org/044921-i-love-abortion-even-if-it-murder

ediblewoman's picture
Volunteer for the Progressive U Alumni Association

Would you rather she kept it a secret form you if she was having sex?

http://www.progressiveu.org/blog/ediblewoman

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