Useless minds
Of fruitless kinds
To waste away
Smile til decay
Misuse of time
Your greatest crime
And was mine too
For spending it on you
The rational
Is no where near progressive
You ignorant confidence
Is no where short of excessive
This is not to all
But this is a post to most
Good luck with your god
Good luck with your ignorant happiness
Good luck with your lack or realization
And Good luck to a race like this
I'm off this net chat crap*which this was the only of, unlike many of your shuttins*
Listen to what your told(Fully)
Judge it for validity
Form the actual reality
...Get real...
We just ride the wave
This body, all it craves
Work it like a slave
Driving it to our graves
All the while it’s us
Notice, not brainless
So when it loses steam
Last spark’s light had gleam
The last sight within it
Is the last might, it permit
The content that it held
And every word it spelled
Only hold meaning to those who knew
Those who watched it as it grew
To die
In a world without ears
Every song goes to waste
In a world ruled by fears
Everyone lives with haste
Too fast, to willingly, bow to another
To last, to killingly, blend in with the clutter
No magical essence
No worshipping presence
No illogical illusions
The gift of being human
Peace
-To dust-(meet ya there)
And this site can't count by the way this is 241 words.
I'm not sure if you are serious. First, this is crap for poetry. It sounds like it originally came from the soul, and you didn't like the sound of it so you raped the english language in order to make it ryme in a scheme.
I dont even get the message but I can guess it's the same cliche bullshit that everyone who thinks they have half a brain (when really they have a full one they don't use any of) writes in order to make a hypothetical people feel like shit.
The rational
Is no where near progressive
What the f*!K are you talking about. Rational thought is one of the most progressive aspects of a thinker.
The last sight within it
Is the last might, it permit
What does that mean!? What useless thing do you have to say with that. I could pick this blog apart but I think you have already stated why I shouldn't.
Misuse of time
Your greatest crime
And was mine too
For spending it on you
"'The rational
Is no where near progressive'
What the f*!K are you talking about. Rational thought is one of the most progressive aspects of a thinker."
To be fair, I think that was a typo; I'd hazard a guess, rejoicing in the adequate function of my full brain, that the author meant to type 'irrational'. That would be my rational interpretation of the line.
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Obviously, as you know from the past, I don't find some of your ideas too enticing. but I do find this poem kinda cool, i like the tempo and tangles in some parts.
also, kind of a shame to see you go. I enjoyed having somebody who actually cared enough to hold a discussion of some length on this site. I didn't really come to your way of seeing things once, but your opposition definitely helped me examine my own takes and developing them further. it was nice to have someone who challenged with depth and enthusiasm